I'm not much of a writer. Everytime I've ever tried to write a story, I always lose interest after the first chapter or prologue. Comic books, on the other hand, are much easier. I usually finish one by the end of every summer. So I recently thought of this new story line, and I just wanted to know what you all might think about it. Tell me if it sounds too cliche or unoriginial!


Okay, the plot focuses around a young boy named Ted. Ted is rich and spoiled. He also does well in school. Despite all of that, he still has very few friends...until he meets Landon. Landon is a drug user, his favorites being cocaine and ecstacy. Ted is suddenly thrust into a new reality the likes of which he's been sheltered from his entire life. The only problem now is that he doesn't want to stop. He must have more...

I want to call it "With all the Demandings of a Child...", a comic-tragedy about a young yuppie and his downward spiral into self-destruction. So what do you think? Lame, or would you read it?